Changes

   After the audience feedback we re filmed the footage we did have because we filmed on 2 different days, this lead to a disturbed continuity between each shot. now we have re-filmed it the shots that lead on after each other now match.

   (screenshots to show difference)

   The main changes we have made are to shots 8 and 9. We originally wanted 19 seconds of footage b between the two shots, the problem was both of the shots were filmed whilst stationery creating a boring set of shots for the audience, to improve this we shortened shot 8, and split shot 9 up into two other shots, the first been a pan across the living room to show jack and Fran sitting on the sofa, then the second shot been a mid shot to extreme closeup with a zoom to allow the audience to see a message that jack has just received from another girl.